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    Hi Harry.
    Loved those poems great prose. When I was in a writing group up Vernon's way, I was taught how to write Haiku, wonderful way to relax, even though my wife hated them.
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    Yes Vernon, old man plod is not what he once was.
    Recall the Cape Town lads, nice as long as you behaved.

    Now female police some barely 5 foot tall, beards and even the odd Turban.
    Not as tough and even though now armed here as you know, frightened to use them in case some one gets hurt.
    Happy daze John in Oz.

    Life is too short to blend in.

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    It's been all a hush on this page for a year. Time to dig around in my poetry box:
    A poem I penned some years ago in memory an event in the Indian Ocean in January 1957. I was junior r/o on Brocklebank's ss Mahanada.


    Lost Ship

    We saw nothing on the wind-glazed surface,
    nothing floating in the spume as we steamed
    across her last position on the chart;
    no scrap of cargo, not a boiler suit,
    nor a crumb of last night’s rice.

    In the dark we’d talked
    in bursts of dots and dashes,
    that other man and me.

    We’d clung in chairs chained to the deck,
    one hand on the tuning knob
    chasing each other’s warbling signals
    as masts swayed
    and phosphor-bronze aerials swung out
    wild over the troughs;
    the other hand thumping a big brass key -
    in the cyclone.

    It was sixty years ago - she flew the flag of Pakistan,
    a new country. But the ‘Minocher Cowasjee’ was old
    I now discover - launched as ‘Parisiana’
    by Irvine’s yard in Hartlepool, where my father -
    back from his war with Kaiser Bill - might well
    have hammered rivets into her, hard against
    his own dad’s hammer on the other side of the plate.

    Three miles down they’re rusted now, those rivets;
    strewn about, forgotten, like Asian mother’s tears.
    She’s just another hull - after all,
    the ocean floors are flung with ships...
    Last edited by Harry Nicholson; 21st June 2024 at 04:10 PM.
    Harry Nicholson

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